There’s an incessant
buzzing in my ear.
Someone’s lament
I hear.
Inside my heart,
something is feeding my fear.
I find it hard to cheer.
Oh hear! I’m not clear.
oh Dear come near,
I feel queer.
I feel unclear,
my condition is severe,
like I was struck by a spear.
I can’t stop the tear,
I hope it will dissapear.
………..
But My dear I was sincere.
Beautiful poetry 💙
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Thank you.😊
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Your poetry acted as a balm to my heart !
Thanks for sharing !
I loved it
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Thank you so much.😊
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Lovely, an incredible pace from using short repeating lines adds to the emotional distress.
Can I make a small suggestion? Change “I hope it dissapear” to ” I hope it WILL disaPPear”.
It is an excellent poem.
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Okay I’ll do that. Thank you for the suggestion.
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Your welcome 🙂
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wow, all the lines rhymed so beautifully. 🙂
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Thank you.😊
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You’re welcome 🙂
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Beautiful !!
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Thank you that means a lot.😊
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Lovely poem
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Thank you 🙂
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This is so beautiful
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Thank you
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My pleasure
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Beautifully written.
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Thank you 😊
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Great poems and the twisted quotes too.. Loved it
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Thank you 😊
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