She is to believe that love
Should feel like a storm
Passionate,
Raw and raging.
But so many storms
Left her
More broken than before.
Now she looks for a love
That feels
Like a night
After the storm
Is over.
The ebbing waves of emotion
Engulfed half her mind
In a state of dilemma
Induced by love
She lost her heart.
Like a tree after a storm
She wished for zephyr
But what followed was pure rage
And left her shattered
Like crystals of ice.
But she lost her heart
And now she doesn’t
Want it back
For she doesn’t want to
Fall prey to love again
And with a heart
She just might!
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Β©The Rendezvous Club and
The Poem Zone. All Rights Reserved
This is a collaboration with Nirant Gurav from the Poem Zone.
Beautifully written β€οΈ
Loved it..π
Relatable….
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Thank you π
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We have done it adiii πππβοΈ
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Ha ha π€
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This is beauty……….and I think she must . πππ€
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π Thank you so much Sakshi Dear
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My pleasure π
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Wow this is one of your best. Gonna have to reblog this one. π
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Thank you so much dear π
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Reblogged this on Emerging From The Dark Night and commented:
I love this piece of poetry.
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Thank you dear for showing love in our collab π
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I just loved it… beautifully written…
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Thank youuuuuuuuuu π
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Great poem and i like the text alignment
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Thank you very much Unni π
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Lovely Collab π
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Thank you so much π
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Lovely poem dear. β€οΈβοΈ
BY FOR NOW
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πβsuch depth.
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Thank you π
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You are Welcome πββ€
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Great use of words and also there is so much emotion behind it. Amazing π
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Thank you very much π
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Amazing… wonderful..π
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Thank you π
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ala townshend after the fire the fire still burns
white hot
and yet not
sad entirely!
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Wonderful…great work guys!!!
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Thank you Fariha π
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beautiful…every line…
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Thank you Geet π€
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welcome…
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I will say – say will with a heart and a mighty pen β€οΈβ€οΈ
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π Thank you π
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Amazingly written!!
Keep sharing π
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Thank youuuuuuuuuu π
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The last four lines… πππππΌπππΌππΌππΌ
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Thank you so much dear π
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Not to mention.. My pleasure dear.. ππ
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The ebbing waves of emotion
Engulfed half her mind
…
Like a tree after a storm
She wished for zephyr
Lovely duet , surely a delight to read . Keep it up.
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Thank you so much Aquib I’m happy that you liked it π
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Loved it. β₯οΈ
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Thank you so much dear π
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Oh wow this is brilliantly lovely
βFor she doesnβt want to Fall prey to love again And with a heart She just mightβ
Very true and relatable
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Thank you so much dear. I’m happy that you liked it π
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Your very welcome sweetie π
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Beautifulβ₯οΈβ₯οΈ
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Thank you Sona π
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‘For she doesnβt want to
Fall prey to love again’.
It scars the heart every time!!
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Thank you so much dear. I’m happy that you liked it π.
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Awesome Adi ππ
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Thank you so much Vincent π
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She used to tell me that a full moon was when mysterious things happen and wishes come true. βShannon A. Thompson. I hope things turn for the better in ‘her’ life. Very gracefully narrated. Regards. Jay
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Thank you so much Jay π
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Your poem makes me happy. Thanks a tone for posting this beautiful poemβ₯
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Thank you shanky π
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Loved it!!
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Thank you Warren π
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Youβre welcome π
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Nice words and nice scenery!
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Beautiful Poetry Adi π
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Thank you Abhi π
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I love the way you’ve brought out the tragic side of love! Lovely!π
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Thank youuuuuuuuuu π
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Nice poem
Really enjoyed it
You expressed the reality of Earthly love .
” she lost her heart and now she doesnβt want it back for she doesnβt want to fall prey to love again”.–superrrrrrrrr , this is the thought goes through everyone who once fall in that cheap sentiments ever born in Earth – Love πππ
Really awesome poem
Thanks for sharing this notable work
May God bless you
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Thank you may God bless you too.
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Beautiful poem
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Thank youuuuuuuuuu π
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You are very welcome
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She just might
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Yes she just might
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How about thinking of ours once gone very few return we can do only what we can in our power stay blessed
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