The silence is piercing into my ears
Breaking this silence I’ve tried
The agony of the incomplete expressions
The weight of the unspoken verse
Pulling my heart down
The love that we shared
Still remains but
What reigns now is misinterpreted thoughts
You’re there within my hands distance
Yet you’re not there
For I’ve lost you to silence
I wish that my soul could converse
What’s in my heart
My soul talks and your heart listens
I wish that the music of unity fills this silence
And we could dance forevermore in pair.
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Great post π
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Thank you Pam
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Beautiful.. loved it.. ππππΌππΌ
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Thank you So much Debi π€
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Even of it is a sad poem, there is a ray of hope π
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Thank you
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I could feel the longing that comes with love … beautiful work Adithya π
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Thank you Sakshi π
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Nice poem. My favourite sentence from this poem – ‘I hope that the music of unity fills the silence’.
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Aww thank you dear π
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this is amazing…loved it…as you are alwaysπ
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Thank you Kabir π
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you’re welcomeπ
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Really great post π
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Thank you very much π
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Beautiful π
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Thank youuuuuuuuuu π
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Pleasure always π π
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Very moving and beautifully written :O) x
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Thank you so much π
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So sad and so sweet. Yes, dance. How beautiful a thought
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Thank yoooooou
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Soulfulπ·
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Awesome as always!
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Thank you Riman π€
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Also… Piercing my ears is more appropriate.
What reigns now *are* misinterpreted thoughts.
This is as per my knowledge. And I may be wrong. I just wanted to help is all.
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Thanks again
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Amazing one again ππ sound of silence π€
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Wonderful π
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Beautifully penned. π
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Thank you π
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You are certainly welcome ππ
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Beautiful love it β€
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Thank you π
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Beautiful post! π
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Thank you Neha π
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Always a pleasure π
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Sometimes all we can do is wish!
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Vincent where were you
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Iβm always here, its kind of a bug for me though, its kind following/unfollowing auto
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Yeah I saw that.
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Beautifully expressed feelingsππ
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Thank you dear ππ
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Sad.. but I can feel that love! beautifully expressed!!
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Thank you Kranti π€
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A couple of grammatical errors β¦.
My soul talks and your heart *listens*( assuming you are talking to a single person as it seems).
I wish that the music of unity *fills* this silence. ( Music is considered singular from what I know).
I wanted to point this out because the rest is flawless.
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Thank you so much for pointing that out. I very bad at grammar π
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Is that deliberate?
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Sometimes
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Stunning piece.
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Thank you Piyush π
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Nice poem dear.
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BY FOR NOW
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Thank you Dawn
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Your Welcome dear.
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BY FOR NOW
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Beautifully penned again, a sense of longing pervades the poem..
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Thank you Tanya π€
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My pleasure
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