The music of your breath
Feels boisterous to my ears now
For they are tormenting me
Day by day, echoing
Incessantly in my ears . . . .
The rhyme that once
Feasted my eyes is now
Making them water in ice and blue
The startling paradoxes
Stare at me with a smirk in it’s face
The striking similes
Questions my sanity
Lost I am in the morals of your parables
They rain heavy in my conscience
Feeding my inner conflict
Suppressing my ideals and faith
Replacing my palaces of hope
With your own answers and robbing
Me of my mistakes, findings, learnings and reasoning
The music of your breath
Feels boisterous to my ears now
For they sing my verse
Which was not written by me!
.
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All Rights Reserved!
Very deep and nice🤗
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Thank you dear 😊
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words from heart is always great…✌😊
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Thank you 😊
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your welcome😊
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So profound. Amazing 😘
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Thank you Sakshi 😊
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My pleasure
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https://papersonfire.wordpress.com/2018/09/12/a-starry-night/
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Amazing!
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Thank you Riman 🤗
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I really enjoyed this piece… great work
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Thank you 😊
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I found this to be stunning in how you made this so deep and enlightened at the same time. Great work my friend !!
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Thank you so much Dear
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You are very welcome my good friend !
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Amazing words 😊
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Thank you 😊
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Nailed it again. The amalgamation of emotions and appropriately chosen words. It is not easy to perceive any form of poetry but when you relate to even a few lines the connect is made.
“The rhyme that once
Feasted my eyes is now
Making them water in ice and blue” … they did the magic for me!
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Thank you so much dear. I’m happy that you liked it 🤗
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Profound 💛
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Thank you Mahee 🤗
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😊
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https://papersonfire.wordpress.com/2018/09/12/a-starry-night/
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🌺
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So Deep !!
You never fail amaze me ❤💯
Keep it up 😃
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Thank you Sumeet 😊
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Beautifully written Adithya
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Thank you so much 😊
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You are welcome Adithya
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Thats word 😍
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Thank you 😊
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Stunning! 🙂
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Thank you dear 🤗
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Nicely portrait
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Thank you
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So profound!❤
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Thank you Richa 🤗
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This was deep and insightful.
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Thank you Moushmi 🤗
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You expressed it fervently
It touched me & I liked it
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Thank you Akshaya
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Deepppppp 👏👏👏
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Thank you Nirant
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Pleasure always 😉 🎀
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Amazing and profound!!
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Thank you Kranti 🤗
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🤗
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Awesome !
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Thank youuuuuuuuuu 😊
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Quite mesmerizing😀
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Thank youuuuuuuuuu 😊
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You are welcome 😊
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It’s so deep & expressed well👌😊
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Thank youuuuuuuuuu Detective 😊
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🕵️🤗😉
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There are many oppressed voices, it’s important to find a way to give the ones who can’t have a voice.. some sort of a way to express themselves.
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Yes that’s true
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So much depth..containing poem…
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Thank you Sushma 😘
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Nice poem dear.
❤️✌️
BY FOR NOW
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Thank you Dawn
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Your Welcome dear.
❤️✌️
BY FOR NOW
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Great post.❤️
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Thank you 😊
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My pleasure ❤️
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