After a very long time of living
In the colors of unrest and peace
I finally heard my heart beat
Inside the deep sea of life
I tried to point my finger at the light
But my hands were hard and shaky
As I looked, at the magic
Of the shadows in the wall
As the moving wind teased
With the sun’s light
Making them dance on the floor
And on my face as well
I felt the breath in my nose,
the warmth in my hands
And realized they were real
For the very first time.
For the very first time
I felt the presence of me in me
After these long hard life
Years living in this planet
Now do I realize that I am alive.
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This creation touched my soul☺️
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Wow ! 🙂
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Thank youuuuuuuuuu 😊
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Presence of me….
Such beautiful lines to depict being alive 👍
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Thank you so much Fariha 🤗
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Lovely poem with a great flow and a blend of rhyme.
Loved it.
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Thank you so much Aman 😊
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Alive and thriving😀😉
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Yes Sakshi 😊
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Loved it
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Alive & Awesome 😉❤
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Yessss 🤗
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Lovely poem dear.
❤️✌️
BY FOR NOW
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Thank you Dawn 🤗
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Your Welcome dear.
❤️✌️
BY FOR NOW
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What a wonderful poem and a beautiful sentiment :O) x
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Thank youuuuuuuuuu 😊
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This is beautiful. I really resonate with this awakening to your presence within and the life living in you and your body.
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Thank you 😊
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Most welcome 🙂
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Felt so fresh and energetic reading this one. Wish more and more people feel the essence of words and start living them someday.
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I wish the same!
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This was awesome,
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Thank youuuuuuuuuu 😊
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This self-reflective piece is so fascinating!! 🙂
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Thank you so much Adi 😊
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You are very welcome!! 🙂
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Awesome
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Thank you Rad 🤗
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You’re welcome 😊❤️
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Fabulous creation Adi👌👌 I love that second line “in the colour of unrest & peace”❤️
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Thank you so much Detective 😊
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Empty stomach could gather more number of butterflies 😂🦋🕵️
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Ha ha lol
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Lol😂z
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If someone will ask me who’s blog are beautiful my answer will your
Your all blogs are nice and this one is just amazing
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Awwww thank you Akram 🤗
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My pleasure
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Great post! And yes you are alive.
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Thank you 😊
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Me when I finally got Spider-Man on ps4 😁
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Lol 😂
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Refreshes me! Great to read.
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wonderful
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Wonderful I love this❤😉
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Thank you 😊
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You are welcome 😊
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Nature does hold the power to bring us all back to life. 🙂
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Yes it does
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Live… free, within that presence! Lovely!
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Thank youuuuuuuuuu 😊
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Really awesome 👌
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Thank you dear 🤗
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Beautiful. I can relate. Mirror self and the chain that passes through beads. Even beyond them the identification of identity might hint. And through that identity to realise self.
Wonderful.
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Thank youuuuuuuuuu 😊
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This is a beautiful awakening! 😊
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Thank you 😊
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You’re welcome 😊
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That is discovery, that is maturity. Welcome home. 🙂
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Thank you so much Susi 😊
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