At the crossroads where
Everything was blurry
I met a stranger
Who’s name I’ve heard of
But haven’t met yet
Who’s voice I’ve neglected several times
But this time it felt more deep and assertive
At the crossroad where
Confusion ruled my mind stronger than ever
Where questions echoed in my mind
What more? what next?
Which turn? Why turn?
My heart felt like
A butterfly inside a jar
In that very hour of unrest
That mellifluous voice
Which I’ve shut out
Hummed in my ears again
Where to turn this time?
I listened to the stranger’s ways
Which felt absurd to me at times
Absurd or not I took the turn
And it changed my life forever and ever
At the crossroads where
Everything was blurry
I met a stranger
Who helped me find my way
That stranger was me!
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“That stranger was me” π―
Damn , loved it π
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Thank you Sumeet π
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You’re welcome ,Adithyaβ€π
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This is so profound …. We often find ourselves at that crossroad……. Best is to listen to that stranger π€π
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Yes it is. Thank you Sakshi π
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My pleasure
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Ahhhhaahh..really awesome..ππ
Nd very true.. lastly u r left with only urself ..Stay blessed nd keep encouraging us Yogiπ
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Lolz Thank you so much Sushma π
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Awww !! It’s really stunning ! Extraordinary poem !!
“That stranger was me!”
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Thank you Akshaya π€
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“My heart felt like
A butterfly inside a jar” it sounds relatable ππ nicely penned poem π & love the ending edge π
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I knew you could relate to that.
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Beautiful β€ π
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Thank youuuuuuuuuu π
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That stranger was meβΊοΈwowwwwππ
Beautiful adiiπ
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That’s so smooth!
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Thank youuuuuuuuuu Jass
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Thank you Nath π€
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Always trust the Me stranger π…… Loved itπ
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Ha ha. Thank you dear π
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Beautiful poetry
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Thank you so much π
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But…but… What does that stranger think?
At the crossroads where everything was blurry
I met an old friend who always neglected me.
She was distressed and said βWhat way? Which turn?β
I was happy that she asked me, thereβs someone who listens to my voice.
Thanking me, she left the cross roads
I could see the belief in her eyes, they had a vision
And before I realized, I was back into the prison.
I told her that if sheβs ever confronted crossroads again
I will be there, through thick and thin, to comprehend.
I know that I am called upon only when thereβs crisis
But I wish someone would talk to me on daily basis.
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Wow this is amazing
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If I didnt tell you this… Your poem is great!
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Thank you
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Lovely poem dear, very thought provoking.
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BY FOR NOW
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Thank you Dawn
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Your Welcome dear.
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BY FOR NOW
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I wish you could be a bit upfront and talk w that stranger…maybe he had an eye on you from your first sight!
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Wow. That was anti climactic. I like that one is poems.
beautiful.
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Thank youuuuuuuuuu
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You are welcome.
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Such a lovely poem β€
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Thank you so much Neha π
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You’re welcome π
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wow.. wonderful
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Thank you π
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Hey.!! I have nominated you for Liebster Award.
https://inspirechange27.wordpress.com/2018/09/16/liebster-award/
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Thank youuuuuuuuuu π
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The end was like a punch line…profound words!!
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Nice… especially the twist in the end…
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Thank you Geet π
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Welcome…
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Loved it…
Loved the end even more….
Keep writing Adi π
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Thank you Riman π€
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Wow simply wow
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Thank you π
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Nicely written!
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Thank you Warren
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Youβre welcome
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To a person who always loses her way yet always manages to reach home safe, I can totally relate to this poem!! Loved it!!
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Thank youuuuuuuuuu π
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Power packed! Wonderfully penned!β€
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Thank you Richa π€
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Beautiful and absolutely relatable πβ₯οΈ
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Thank youuuuuuuuuu π
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It’s wonderful to realize that our super-hero within gives us courage and strength, AND wisdom! Just sad that sometimes it takes a long time before they introduce themselves. π Loved this!
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Thank you Susi π
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