The beaming sun and it’s misty Ray’s
Escaped the giggling fog and
The hide and seek of leaves and trees and
They fell on my face,
Where they felt destined to be
Simply warming my cheeks,
Defrosting my nose from the chilling night
Knocking on my eyelids and
Alarming my ears that it’s time
To let my feet touch the ground again
Because someone is eagerly waiting for me
Amongst the clouds, and he wish for me
To be with him, for all the remaining mornings and nights too.
To be forever with me
And he’s eagerly waiting amongst the clouds.
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Β© 21/12/18 The Rendezvous Club
All Rights Reserved
Lovely. Beautiful. I just felt them all.
Your poem bounded me to imagine this all
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Lovely love & beautiful words
And both the images remind me of morning π
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Thank you so much Nirant π€
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Pleasure always π π
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Very pougnant.
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Love. Love. Love ππΈβ€οΈ
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Ahhh so beautiful
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Thank you Sakshi π
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My pleasure
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Wow I absolutely love this post. The imagery you created with your words. Sunbeam reaching you and warming your cheeks. Very beautiful dear
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Thank you so much Sona π
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A lovely poem
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Thank youuuuuuuuuu π
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Youβre welcome
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Hey amazing poem… Love it.. β€οΈ
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Beautiful is the word.
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Thank you π
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My pleasure
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You don’t talk much but your writings just speaks out ur heart… Your choice of words and creativity is amazing. Who r the rays referred to bt? π
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Thank you. Rays it’s nobody
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I know bt m asking who is the unknown or Maybe known one?
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Only God knows who
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Our parents r also our God so maybe ask them π
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Ha ha yeah
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And I have asked you a question there on the award that HOW MUCH DO YOU RATE ME ON A SCALE OF 1 TO 10? I want ur truthful answer now.
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I woke give you a 9 just because I don’t give out a ten
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R u serious coz this is quite high fr me, well I also never give a 10 to anyone. Can you tell the reason bt? π
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Ten seems like full and nothing is perfect or full.
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I wanted 7-8, u r an intelligent one & I was pestering u with my silly questions. If u remember that thn u must take that into consideration π
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Ha ha π
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Beautiful. Like the feelings are so palpable.π
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Thank youuuuuuuuuu π
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My pleasure.π€
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Beautiful post!β€ππ
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Thank youuuuuuuuuu π
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Yes surely someone does wait for the one
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Yeah
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Beautiful!!
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How beautiful.. loved it Adi!!
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Thank you so much Kranti π€
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Very very beautiful π
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Thank you so much dear
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Welcome adwitya πβΊοΈ
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Awww this is so heartwarming, Iβm touched by itβs pleasantry.
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Thank you very much Sweetie π
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Youβre welcome dear π
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Wonderful poem!
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Soulfulβ€
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Lovely π have a great morning and beautiful night! cheers,keep blogging dear β€οΈπͺπΆπ
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Thank you π
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My pleasure π
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Such a lovely poem π€
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Thank youuuuuuuuuu π
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Simply awesome
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Thank youuuuuuuuuu π
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Yo
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Profound
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Thank you π
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