While I was five
I told my Mamma
That I was incomplete,
Then she told me that
This is how everyone is
And you’ll find your
Missing pieces along the way
Until you turn sixty
And after sixty you’ll lose
A few of those pieces
You’ve found and
You’ll be very perfect after that.
.
Then I turned thirteen
I asked my Mamma
What if the pieces that
I have found wasn’t mine,
Then she told me that
This is how life is and
Well all find pieces
Which aren’t ours
Some of those pieces we return
To their owners, some just wither
Some break away, some stays put
Like dirt in the eye, hurting us.
But some pieces completes others
Even though they are with us.
Strange are the ways of life.
.
When I turned twenty
I told my Mamma
That I can feel the unrest inside
Of the pieces that aren’t mine.
I said, it moves around a lot
Occupy spaces which doesn’t belong to it.
Then she said, now you’re old enough
To understand pain, but you also know
To love enough, so that the love,
Can occupy the unoccupied space and
Never let the missing pieces and hurt complain.
.
Then I turned thirty-three,
I told my Mamma
That you don’t know anything
You said that I’ll lose pieces that aren’t mine
But along with them, I’ve lost some of mine too.
Then she told me that,
The pieces you’ve lost
Wasn’t needed for you,
For whatever you’ve lost
Will give you space,
For new ones to take
I know it will be hurtful for a while
But only those pieces
Which should be you
Can be yours, others will fade
Other all pieces will fade away.
.
Now I’m sixty
And I’m perfect
Just like she said
Perfect in the most imperfect way
Incandescently happy
With all the pieces I have met,
And all the pieces I have left
And the spaces are there
But they’re perfect for me
To store my love in.
And now I know that
My Mamma was right,
She was always right.
.
.
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Amazing! Beautiful flow of story with pains and love and quench for answers to the questions inside the mind flutters! Great poem! Keep up the great work dear ❤️
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Thank you so much Ravindra. I hope you enjoyed reading this 🤗
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Yes I enjoyed it✌️🎄💖🎄🎄🎄💖💖💖🎄🎄🎄
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Love this poem very much… very beautiful dear 😊❤
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Thank you very much dear 😊
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Loved it❤️
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Thank youuuuuuuuuu 😊
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Superb. A wonderful analogy of life.
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Thank youuuuuuuuuu 😊
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My pleasure
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Absolutely love this post! Couldn’t stop reading it! Really superb!👌💟
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Amazing flow Adii and mom is always ri8
That was amazing and touched deeply to my 💓
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And more pieces you, exchange through life the more beautiful you become. I will read this few times more, and savour every feeling of what is in between the lines.😍
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I feel incandescently happy right now
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Good to know that.😇
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Wonderful piece
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Thank you very much 😊
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I love the choice of wordss…beautifully written!!
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Thank you Piyush 😊. Thank you for the support 🤗
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Beautiful! love this!!
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Thank you so very 🤗
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Wow.. Amazing piece of work Adi.. Kudos to your writing.. I liked every line of it…
At last Being perfect after all the pieces i have met and all the pieces i have lost…
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A writer feels satisfied only when their work is read and appreciated. And I’m contented . Thank you Chiru 😊
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Yes..keep growing Adi..
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You have a very wise Mumma and it’s shows in your philosophical works.😊😊
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Thank youuuuuuuuuu Sunil 🤗
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Nice……👌👌
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Thank you 😊
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Amazing ❤️👍
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Thank you so much 😘
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Wow! That is a good description of life.
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Thank you Winnie 😘
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You’re welcome! 😊❤️
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I know which r ur pieces, still this a master piece 👏
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Thank youuuuuuuuuu
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Yes, Mummas are always right.. 👍🏼😉
Great piece.. 😊👌🏼👌🏼👌🏼
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Thank you so much Debi 🤗
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😇💕
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Beautifully written❤👌… The one person you always trust blindly in whole life is Mom. 😊
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Yes very true. Thank youuuuuuuuuu 😊
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This is so beautiful… We definitely are grateful for our mother’s guidance… 😍
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Yes we are 🤗
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Your mama reigns surely and what a good mamas boy great post these days no one listens
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Thank youuuuuuuuuu
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Omg ! This is jus so awesome ..!! I am at loss of words right now . Ur really a good writer . Jus wow wow n wow 😍😚
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Thank you so much Meenakshi 🤗🤗
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Hey I had this question in mind ever since i started following your blog.
What’s your major? Are you an English student?
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Yes I’m doing my bachelor’s in English
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Hope that piece you Like will never go 😉
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Awwwwwwwww thank you 😊
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What a lovely story. Your mother is true 🌸😊
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Thank you so much Shantanu 😊
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My absolute pleasure
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Just Amazing ♥️💯
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Thank you Sumeet 🤗
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Wow, just amazing! Mom knows everything.. she is always right.. loved it!!
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Thank youuuuuuuuuu Kranti 😊
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Always my pleasure 🤗
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Lovely!
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Thank you 😊
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You’re welcome
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So beautiful! I love this
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Thank you 😊
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Wonderful!
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Thank youuuuuuuuuu 😊
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Wow that’s brilliant
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Thank youuuuuuuuuu 😊
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Ah, I wish I’d had a great mama like that. Such a good teacher, and you a good writer. 🙂
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Thank you so much Susi 🤗
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🙂
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Beautifully written, loved it ♥️ thank you for sharing 😇
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Thank youuuuuuuuuu 😊
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Mind blowing post
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Thank youuuuuuuuuu!
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Loved this! Brilliant!❤️
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Thank you 😊
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I’ve just read this, loved it
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Thank you 😊
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Mothers are a gift. Thank you for this one.
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Thank you 🤗
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You’re welcome.
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