Stay, stay a minute longer
I know you’ve got places to be
But my secrets can’t be held back any longer
And my hands don’t like staying cold either
My tears are all ready to flow
And my heart is ready for you to open it
So just stay back, stay a minute longer
I know we walked all evening
And the sunset was great
And our hairs all frizzy from the salt in the sea
But the moon is about to come up
Shouldn’t we watch that too
Isn’t he ours
So darling, just stay, just a minute
Just one minute more
And continue looking into my eyes
As you are looking right now
Until I see the stars in them
Until my eyes had enough of you
Until you hear the cracking sound
Coming from inside of me
So stay, stay a minute longer
I won’t ask for hours
Just minutes are all I need
Minutes that make up,
That add up, to the whole of eternity. So . . .
Stay !
Stay with me a minute more.
©9/01/19 The Rendezvous Club
All Rights Reserved!
Darkness is beautiful isn’t it?
We can find the stars shining in the darkness.
With a tinge of melancholy you made the poem wonderful.
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Thank you so much Amartya!
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Pleasure.😃
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Lovely !!
Tussi naa jaooo….
Just stay a min longer 😉🖤
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Actually thodi der aur ther jaa…..😋
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Hanjii
Thodi deer auur theer jaaa…
Kahi uuss channddhh lamho mein , Pyaar na hojye 😉😉
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😂😂
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😄😄😄😄
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Thank you Nirant
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Pleasure always for ur words adiii 😁
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Absolutely beautiful. Tender and touching.
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Thank you very much!
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You’re welcome
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🙂 Title is brilliant & poem also 🙂 Thanks for sharing 😉
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Thank you
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😉
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Emotional flow of poem
Warm walk and evening ☕
Stay a minute stronger
Moon will shine a bit longer
Stay and see the rising sun
Will appear with new hope
Don’t run…
Don’t break 🌿
Enjoy near the lake
Calmness will dance
Look look at the dawn
Like a second chance…
Ridges and river cloudy glance
unturned dreamy snow
Keep blogging with the flow
Enjoy🌿🎄🌿
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Just great !😄
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That is so beautiful. Thank you!
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My pleasure always dear🌿🤗🌿
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So beautiful. He will surely stay.
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He he Thank you !
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My pleasure
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Profoundly beautiful!
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Thank you so much Winnie !
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You’re welcome!
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Soulful…💖
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Thank youuuuuuuuuu!
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💝💝💝
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😘
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Wow !! Lost in beautiful words ! Reminds me of the song “tu thodi der aur ther jaa, zaalima !”😄
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I sure will listen to it then
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Its nostalgic for me. Thank you for sharing it.
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Thank youuuuuuuuuu for reading !
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Its my pleasure.🙂
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Superbly beautiful ❣
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Thank you so much dear!
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This is so cute ♥️♥️♥️
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Awwwwwwwww thank you Sumeet !
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Wow, this is just so great, from a great blog
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Thank you very much!
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Awesome
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Thank you!
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You created the desire so real and authentic. I just loved it ❤️
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Thank you very much Shantanu!
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My absolute pleasure
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Absolutely beautiful!!
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Thank you Kranti!
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😊
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Beyond words.. 🤐☺️👌🏼😇
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Thank youuuuuuuuuu Debi !
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😇💕
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Nice
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Thank youuuuuuuuuu!
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Thank you very much!
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Fabulous
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Thank you
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Doing one thing will make it boring, this is a nice poem with great thinking.
U r intelligent, just leave from this virtual world & let the real world take over u.
Goodluck & hope u take a break & comeback again.
Just remember ur password, I often forget it 😉
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I am trying that 😅
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Nice thn 😏
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Lovely!
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Thank you
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You’re welcome
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Beautiful
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Thank you. I’m so honored
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to the whole sum of eternity…moments collected… beautiful
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Thank you so much!
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my pleasure
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Beyond beautiful
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Thank you Sakshi
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Great 👍
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Thank you!
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Wow. You are a great poet. Keep up.
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Thank you 😊
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You are most welcome dear friend.
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Beautiful show of loving! Thanks for the follow of I Write Her. I hope you enjoy my thoughts. 🙂
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Thank you!
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You’re welcome! 🙂
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Absolutely beautiful!
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Thank you Richa 🤗
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aww how pleasant
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Thank you 😊
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Just stay a min..I will come to you and kiss you😘😘…for writing such a touching poem😍
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Awww thank you 😍
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