The infinite number of days we’ve spent
Talking about the holes we have in each other
Making up plans to fill those holes,
Coming to a conclusion that,
Whatever darkness we both held
Can’t fill our holes because
Darkness leaves a void. . .
Then you gave me your hole and
I gave you mine and we became whole for a while
I never knew before that
Holes in two chest can be filled
If you just put one above the other,
But it just did, and the holes became whole
Until time came with light and
Two hearts parted, for the best.
That’s when I realized that
No one is whole, everyone is full of holes
And those holes never filled mostly because
Future intervened and the present
Slowly drifted into past!
.
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17/01/19 © The Rendezvous Club
All Rights Reserved!
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very beautiful….
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Love the depth of this
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Beautiful.😊
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Lovely !!
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Pleasure always for beautiful stuff mate 😁😉
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Wow
Meaningful concept revealed through beautiful words.
Featured image is apt
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Loved the concept. Nicely weaved.
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Fascinating word play.
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Thank you very much Shilpa 🤗
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Loved it😊
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“Two holes become whole.” I like that play on words. Beautiful.
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Thank you very much. I’m happy that you liked it 🤗
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Very interesting poem. I enjoy reading and then reading again. Each time, I find something else that catches my attention.
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Love this one
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my absolute pleasure
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Heartfelt and beautiful!❤
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Beautiful words!
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Believe it .. Reading again and again😀 .. unique it is ❤️
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Profoundly beautiful!!
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Thank you Kranti 🤗
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Wow……. Very beautiful…….👌👌
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Hole & whole !
Very creative ♥️😉
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Nicely said!
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Perfectly penned with wonderful creativity 👌👌👌
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Great share! Keep blogging my friend 💐
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I felt a lot of holes in me after reading this 😥😥
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We all have them
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Very good post, keep up the good work. Thanks!
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