One day I’ll die and you won’t even know,
What I’ve been through.
I’ll just be a smear of black paint in the wide space,
Unseen by the eyes.
I’ll never see a star nor be one, I’ve never shined,
Not even once.
I’ll never be good, good enough, enough now,
Now it’s time to die.
I did try hard, to stay alive, I tried to breathe,
As hard as I can.
But the air got stuck in the vortex in between,
my mind and heart.
And tears lodged my lungs making it unbearable for me,
To carry on any further.
So one day, I’ll die, let that be now,
Why not now.
.
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Sadly beautiful dear…
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Thank you dear π
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I am sitting here thinking about the weight of each line. I don’t know what to say. I feel that too π¦
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Don’t feel bad dear. Some things are like this only.
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i wish things could change
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Me too
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Why this soo heartfelt…Why this made me cryπ
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Cheer up Sushu π€
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This is deep and beautiful.
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Thank you so much dear π
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πππ why now ????
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π
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Gloomy as ever π
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Yes that only
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Heartfelt, Adi.
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Thank you Shivani π€
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Beautifully written Adithya.
Oh no, not now. The coffee is still with me. We have to get into the 210 cups
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Yeah I will let you know about that
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Great
Thank you
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Hey Adi, what’s wrong? You can mail me you know? Maybe I can help, it does feel good to talk to someone. Don’t forget there is always light after darkness. Just give tye time a chance. Don’t rush things. You might be heartbroken now, but have you thought how you’ll be feeling this time next year? Things change. Don’t worry, everything will be ok.
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Thank you so much Novus my dear. I am okay, just having a hard time. I’ll be fine actually reading your comment I am already feeling better. Thank you so much dear π
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Ok. That’s good to know. π
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Don’t try anything stupid. Be strong girl!
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Yeah I will be darling
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Adi what a heartfelt post! I agree with Krishna comment, it is indeed sadly beautiful… X
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Thank you π
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I agree with Novus there is always light after darkness. There is light at the end of every tunnel. I have been there and now I look forward to sunshine in my life everyday. Love yourself, you are worth it π xx
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Thank you very much for this heart warming comment. I will look up to see the light
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Please do my dear xo
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Beautiful. π
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Thank you Amartya
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Ok thats very saddy sad post. I know you are a strong minded person.
So aha keep smiling. ππ.
Best wishes. Aquib.
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Thank you very much Aquib π
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Heartfelt and beautiful Adithya. π
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Thank you Pam π€
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You wrote the emotions of an unrequited heart so well – now write another piece how the heart survived and flourished
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Thank you Shantanu π€
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My absolute pleasure
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This is deep.
Stay strong Adithyaβ€οΈ
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Thank you Aqsaa π€
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Painfully beautifulβ¨
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Thank you π
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So much sadness in these words, unbelievably create such a beautiful poem… X
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Thank you very much dear. May I know your name?
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I’m Suki…
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Oh thanks for letting me know dear
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If those are only words of the poem then they are heartfelt and beautiful. But if that’s you thenπ€π€π€β€
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Thank you so much dear π
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Beautiful poem, hope you’re not feeling too sad. . .
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I’m fine thank you for asking π€
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I guess you must’ve felt your heartbeats while writing this!
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Yes I did
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We will never know if we were alive or not π’
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Yes
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Powerful Poem. Keep looking up.
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Thank you π
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Heartfelt and beautiful π€
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Thank you Kranti π€
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π€
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Painful
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Yes
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Keep blogging dearπ
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Very painful and I like pain. But Adithyaaaa you wrote very beautifully. Amazing poem.
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Thank you Ashish π
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Dark and deep! You are so talented!β€οΈβ€οΈ
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Thank you so much Richa π€
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This is very moving. I hope you’re ok, I know life can be painful, but I want you to know. Your light does shine! xxx
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Aww thank you so much dear π
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Reindeers the word, stay alive one day at a time.
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