When I said that I couldn’t breathe
I thought that you’d hear me,
Hear my heart composing odes
To all my heartbreaks.
.
When I said that I was sad
I thought you’d feel the salt in my words
And know that my tears had
A story to tell.
.
When I said that I trusted you
I thought that you’d understand that
I meant ‘ I love you’
And things beyond that .
.
When I said that I’m subpar
I thought you’d say
I am good,
At least for you.
Β©09-02-19 The Rendezvous Club
All Rights Reserved!
Beautiful
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Thank you π
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Uhmm….!!
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I know it’s stupid
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Shush! It’s not stupid.
It means I’m speechless. π
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Ha ha I’m happy that you liked it π
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Atlast ….I understood π£
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Lol
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Wonderful! ‘the salt in my words’ touched my heart!π
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Thank you so much dear π
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Beautifully expressed ππ»
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Thank you so very much dear π
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Ahhhh the things we say ……..with the hope what lies between the lines will be understood …….. beautifully expressed
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I’m happy that you understood my words Sakshi π. Thank you so much dear π
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My pleasure always π
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A beautiful poem.
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Thank you so much dear π
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My pleasure π
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Yet again. Beautifully written.
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Thank you very much π€
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I enjoyed reading your poem several times. The words bring much to my mind in a very rich way. Thanks for sharing.
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I’m so very happy that you liked it
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Wow!!!!
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Greatπ
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Thank you so much π
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Adithya You actually struck a chord in my heart with this one. Very sweet direct and caring message for someone !!
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Thank you very much James. I’m happy that you liked it
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I did trust me Adithya.
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So beautiful.
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Thank youuuuuuuuuu ππ
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So beautiful and sad
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Thank you very much Milford π€
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Awesome post Adithya π
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Thank you dear π
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Beautiful,,,I think ur atleast may be atmost thing happened to him adhi
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Aww thank you but there no him π
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Atmost best thing
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Beautiful… β£
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Thank you so much dear π
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Beautifully penned!
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Thank you Winnie π
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Youβre welcome π
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Love it as always
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Yeah
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This is so very heartfelt – loved it
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Thank you π
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My absolute pleasure
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π₯ you stole my idea , my feelings like a real poet steal anyone pain or other hidden feeling…y u r such a real poetess…
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Aww thank you. I thought you were going to the police for copyright breach. π
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Touching πππ& nicely penned adiπlove itπ
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Thank you very much Hardip π€
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Poignantly beautiful.
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Thank you Sunil π€
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I read your words again and again, and you touch my soul, thank you for sharingβοΈ
(My english is not that good, Iβm from Norway, but I hope you understand)
Have a great dayπΈ
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I’m so happy that you liked it
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Painfully beautiful share my friendπ
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Thank you π
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My pleasure π
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Nice post
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Thank you π
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Welcome
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Beautiful β£
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So beautifully penned, things we do for love!
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Yes exactly π€
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Lovely!
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Thank you π
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Youβre welcome
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Expectations wrote down…. you just make people understand with simple words… πππ
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Thank you Chiru π
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I love the line… when I said that I trusted you…
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Thank you so much π
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Beautifully expressed, so poignant.
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Thank you Martha π€
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You are very kindly welcome. By the way, it is Marta, no h. π π
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I will keep that in mind π
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It is fine, Adithya. (Hope this is the right spelling of your name)
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Yes you did
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Thanks, dear.
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