I’m not a great story teller
But I do write stories
Actually I just write our story
In a million different ways
And every time it ends the same
With you breaking my heart
And mending it again,
To break it even more
To hear it crack,
To write your name
Against each broken pieces of my heart
And call it yours, while
You don’t give me yours.
You dance with me and
Disappear as I twirl,
While my loose hair
Unties from the bun,
You leaves me standing there
In that dress and messed up hair.
While I dance to the slow sad music
” Silence ” and still feel your breath there
In the room.
As time flies by,
The stories they change
You and I are to blame.
And under this moonlight dome
I sit and write,
Another one of our story
Not to be read by you
But to be felt by pain and
I mourn you
Just the same.
ยฉ10-02-19 The Rendezvous Club
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Poignant
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Yes
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Our story has lot to see and lot to say !!
Touching words dear ๐
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Thank you so much Nirant ๐ค
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Pleasure for ur amazing words that touches deep ๐๐ค
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This is sadly beautiful. Loved reading it. ๐
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Thank you very much dear. I’m happy that you liked it
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My pleasure ๐
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Beautiful …. Poignant
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Thank you so much Sushma ๐ค
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So touching ๐
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Thank you so much Vrunda ๐ค
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I love the way it’s written.
This is a great story.
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Thank you so much Pavan. I’m happy that you read this.
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Nice dear… Keep onโค
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Thank you very much ๐
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A beautiful poem.
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Thank you very much dear ๐
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Youโre welcome ๐
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So beautiful
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Thank you so much Sakshi ๐
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Thank you Adithya
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Beautiful poem Adithya.
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Thank you very much Shivani ๐ค
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This is so beautuful even in its sadness x
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Thank you so much dear ๐
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Poignantโฃ
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Yes it is
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Lost for words! Loved it so much… โค
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Thank you very much dear ๐ค
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It makes me wonder if each love is a story, some with happy endings and others with sad ones. Beautiful and thought provoking. Cheers
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Each love definitely is a story.
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So nice and very passionate
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Thank you ๐
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You are always very welcome Adithya. Take care โบ๏ธ
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Itโs true
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Poignantly beautiful
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Thank you so much Winnie ๐ค
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Youโre welcome! ๐โค๏ธ
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You explain the unrequited love so well. Nicely done
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Thank you so much Shantanu ๐
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My pleasure
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I love the way you write, thank you, love from Norway๐
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Thank you so much dear ๐
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Very real! Thanks for sharing.
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Thank you so much ๐ค
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Oh Adhi you too? I so can resonate with you…
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Yesh
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Lovely sadly written, keep blogging dear๐นHave a beautiful evening๐
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Thank you so much dear ๐
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You’re most welcome ๐
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Nice one
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Thank you ๐
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Welcome
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Poignantly beautiful!!
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Thank you so much Kranti ๐ค
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My pleasure always ๐ค
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Poignantly beautiful โค
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Heartfelt!โค๏ธ
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Thank you so much dear ๐
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Unrequited love and longing expressed so beautifully, ๐ well done!
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Thank you so much Tanya
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It’s like you’ve lived a relationship of mine. This is so well-written! Thanks for sharing.
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Thank you Susi ๐ค
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Ouch! That was deep
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๐ Thank you
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Beautiful. melancholic.
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Thank you ๐
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The story that’s not meant to be read by you, oh that line. This was simply beautiful. ๐
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Thank you so much!
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Powerful and very apt. I had an encounter with story telling sometime back and this is what I inferred https://sunniesmybunnies.wordpress.com/2017/10/10/storytelling/
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Hey, how’s it going?
I want to pass along some very important news that everyone needs to hear!
In December of 2017, Donald Trump made history by recognizing Jerusalem as the captial of Israel. Why is this big news? Because by this the Jewish people of Israel are now able to press forward in bringing about the Third Temple prophesied in the Bible.
Jewish Rabbis have publicly announced that their Messiah will be revealed in the coming years who will be a leader and spiritual guide to all nations, gathering all religions under the worship of one God. They deny Jesus as their Messiah, and the Bible tells us this Jewish Messiah will be the counterfiet that will bring about a false peace, and ultimatley the great tribulation.
They even printed a coin to raise money for the Temple with Donald Trumps face on the front and with king Cyrus'(who built the second Temple) behind him. On the back of the coin is an image of the third Temple.
More importantly, the power that runs the world wants to put a RFID microchip in our body making us total slaves to them. This chip matches perfectly with the Mark of the Beast in the Bible, more specifically in Revelation 13:16-18:
“He causes all, both small and great, rich and poor, free and slave, to receive a mark on their right hand or on their foreheads, and that no one may buy or sell except one who has the mark or the name of the beast, or the number of his name.
Here is wisdom. Let him who has understanding calculate the number of the beast, for it is the number of a man: His number is 666.”
Referring to the last days, this could only be speaking of a cashless society, which we have yet to see, but are heading towards. Otherwise, we could still buy or sell without the mark amongst others if physical money was still currency. This Mark couldn’t be spiritual because the word references two different physical locations. If it was spiritual it would just say in the forehead. RFID microchip implant technology will be the future of a one world cashless society containing digital currency. It will be implanted in the right-hand or the forehead, and we cannot buy or sell without it! We must grow strong in Jesus. AT ALL COSTS, DO NOT TAKE IT!
“Then a third angel followed them, saying with a loud voice, โIf anyone worships the beast and his image, and receives his mark on his forehead or on his hand, he himself shall also drink of the wine of the wrath of God, which is poured out full strength into the cup of His indignation. He shall be tormented with fire and brimstone in the presence of the holy angels and in the presence of the Lamb. And the smoke of their torment ascends forever and ever; and they have no rest day or night, who worship the beast and his image, and whoever receives the mark of his nameโ (Revelation 14:9-11).
People have been saying the end is coming for many years, but we needed two key things. One, the Third Temple, and two, the technology for a cashless society to fulfill the prophecy of the Mark of the Beast.
Visit http://WWW.BIBLEFREEDOM.COM to see proof for these things and much more!
If you haven’t already, it is time to seek God with all your heart. Jesus loves you more than you could imagine. He wants to have a relationship with you and redeem you from your sins. Turn to Him and repent while there is still hope! God bless!
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Jesus is Christ.
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Which is your favourite writings/ poetry?which language prefer to read more?
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English I prefer the most mate ๐
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Who is your favourite writer?
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Me
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You have proved your talent
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