My works are like, leaves of a tree in autumn
Waiting to be carried to it’s grave.
Waiting to be carried by the air
To go the places, it has seen.
Carry them to a pile of other leaves
Where it’ll be burned later on
And those ashes I’ll wear on my face.
My face shall resemble a dead women’s then,
All words marks and no feelings
With wrinkles not beautiful like leaves veins,
Neither parallel nor reticulate.
But maybe like roots
That never found water.
Water not my words, while at death bed
And not burry us, while we both die.
Rather burn us and collect those ashes
In a discarded bottle and keep it safe, openly
For another dead woman, to find it,
Reach her hands into it and
Wear those ashes on her face.
.
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Β©16/04/19 The Rendezvous Club
All Rights Reserved!
You always amaze me ! Very well written!
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Thank you so much!
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you are very welcome
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Wow πΈ
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Thank you so much Aman π€
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Always pleasure mine πΈπ€
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Well written and it’s deep.
Thanks for sharing.
keep up the good work.
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Thank you!
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Ur works are always great dear π
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Thank you Nirant
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Pleasure always for beautiful stuff mate
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So deep Adi… I just miss the ending like you used to do usually..
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Aww thanks dear. Recently I am lost so I don’t even know what I’m writing.
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no worries.. give it a time… you will find yourself..
Happy day Adi..
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Artisticπ
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Thank you
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Amazing!
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Thank you so much Winnie
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Youβre welcome!
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Amazing as usual !!
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Aww thank you π
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Absolutely well written. I love it.
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Thank you so much dear
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beautiful writing
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Thank you!
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buds out
cold
snaps
the twigs
from the trees
as the flee
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Thank you!
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The picture, the words, the feeling – beautiful β€οΈ
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Thank you so much Shantanu π
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My absolute pleasure
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Profound writing! Love it!!
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Thank you so much Kranti π€
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The words lost among the wind and the nature around….Adi take it slow…give some time and find what’s lost.
Your words express your flow of thoughts.
Take care Adhi…
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Thank you dear π€
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This feels so sad
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This is brilliantly written! Beautiful!β€οΈ
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Thank you so much Richa π
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When you put a part of your agony in your words they cry.Your poetry made me cry.Take care dearπ€
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Thank you so much Yasmin. I hope you are well.
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I am goodπ€
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Oh this is so beautiful! I have nominated you for the Sunshine Blogger Award! Enjoy it! https://popsiclesociety.com/2019/04/19/sunshine-blogger-award-5/
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Thank you!
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My pleasure βΊοΈ
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Wow…….. You are amazing dear…….. This is awesome one…….ππππ
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Thank you so much dear π€
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poignant.
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ππ
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amazing!!!
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Thank you!
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Welcome π
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Amazing… Please read my works too..
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Sure dear
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Loved itπ
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Thank you so much
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Superbly written!
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Thank you!
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