Mamma brings me sherbet
Every morning
In the color of blood.
They reminds me of the morning
In which I saw actual blood
Corroding and turning black
Underneath her bed, vomitted.
She says he loved her greatly once.
He hit her yesterday too.
There’s dried blood in her broken lips
Like dried red hibiscus.
She won’t kiss me now, (true loves kiss)
She’s scared that I might incur
The same fate as her.
So tell me now,
Does your love also smell of anemic blood
Will I be able to kiss my children
Without being scared of their doom?
Will I be able to give my children
Milk every morning
Or is it sherbet in red?
So tell me now,
Do you love me truly or greatly?
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I sincerely hope and pray that all these ugly things didn’t happen to you and your mom. God forbid if they did; am sure they won’t to your children. Much love and many blessings to you (may I know your name ?)
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Thank you so much. My name is Adithya.
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Pleasure Adithya
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Nice sherbet
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Thabks
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Pleasure always
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💕
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💕💕💕
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Sherbet😞 strong write up Adi.. I hope that’s not the case in true love…
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Thank you Chiru 🤗
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Sherbet signifies love too. Maybe it will be a fictional love in your life.🙂💙
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Yeah that could be too
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Subhanallah! This is such a deep read. Your pen speaks volumes. May Allah bless you.
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Thank you very much dear for the constant support.
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The pleasure is certainly mine
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This is such a deep thought …
I think that such mothers are the real super heroes in the life of their children .!
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Mothers are heros
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Yes
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..very dark. A phase in passing I hope.
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I also thought that
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OMG 💔 Too painful write up 😦
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💕💕💕
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Your writing has such maturity …….the pain could be felt
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Thank you very much Sakshi. Those words means a lot to me.
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You are most welcome darling 😘
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This is so dark and painful…
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❤️❤️❤️
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naw
caw
macaw
from raven
to the white black birds
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Yes ❤️
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well well well
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nice💐
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Thanks ❤️
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This is truly intense.
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Thank you so much 💕
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You’re welcome 😊
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This is the best thing I read today.
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😍 That means a lot to me
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Wow, what a read!
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Thank you Joey
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Good one Adithya…
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Thank you dear
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You’re welcome dear 🌷🌷
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Amazing writing – you will earn all love my friend
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Thank you so much for the wishes Shantanu 🤗
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My absolute pleasure
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Adithya, you have written a powerful poem. As readers, our thoughts are racing all over the place.
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Thank you so much dear. I’m happy that you liked it
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Well I think you have a PhD in writing poetry which predominantly are deep and dark in nature. To express pain, it needs guts, emotions and little bit of skills.
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Thank you Abhay. You’ve observed amazingly well
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Well, I am good at it😉
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Ouch!💔
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🤗
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Well the title is attractive bt the poem makes me melt, ur imagination is excellent bt certainly needs some change of happiness … Btw I Hope u r all good..
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I will start posting something happy soon.
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Beautifully written, so heartfelt and poignant, Adithya. Why must there be so much blood and suffering in this world as a result of malicious power abuse? You have expressed everything so well… Here I pray for all the blood shed to turn into delicious sherbet for each abused human being.
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Yes Marta
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😊🤗
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Your poetry is so engaging!!! It’s a pleasure to read them! Keep writing always!!
I have nominated you in a chain of Liebster awards because you have been a pleasure to read and more people should know that! Do visit the link and join along 😊
https://beinganithapeters.wordpress.com/2019/06/03/the-liebster-award/
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Awwww thank you so much dear
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This is so deep and painful! 💔🤗
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Thank you 🤗
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Always my pleasure! 🤗
Hey, Adi, I am sorry.. but your posts are not appearing in my reader!
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I was a little inactive maybe it is because of that.
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Maybe 😟
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