Mamma told me to sink down the sea
Mamma told me to lie on my back
And let the sun shine on my skin.
Tear off both the wings on my back
Tear off all the feathers that’s been
Weighing me down from being a human
All of this while.
Mamma said let no one walk on your back by
Calling you an angel.
Mamma told me, be a girl darling
Don’t pretend you have wings
You have two hands and that’s always enough.
Wear that striped shirt, that full sleeve one.
Ride a ship into the mouth of the sun
Burn, burn yourself up.
Then come back the next day to tell
All the tale, wear your darkness
All on your eyes, wear your burn marks
All over your tongue, spit words of fire
And let them know how
Flawed of a human you are and
Let no one walk on above you
Calling you an angel, you’re human
As flawed as everyone,
Remember that and walk up,
Work up, to your dreams.
Β© The Rendezvous Club 2019
All Rights Reserved!
What a beautiful imagery is created in this awesome piece here dear.. β€π.. Loved it thoroughly.. ππππΌππΌππΌππΌ
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Pleasure mine Adi.. πππΌπ
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Itβs absolutely wonderful
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Youβre welcome π
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You have created such scenes from wearing wings as Angel flying into the sun. I agree none of us are perfect and will never be in this life time. But we will all be perfect in the next life with God, Jesus Christ and The Holy Ghost in Heaven.
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Amen I do not have emojis om my desk top PC Adithya. But I am sending hearts and smiles and hugs !!
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Thank you James
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No problem. I just do not use my phone for checking wordpress.com
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Beautiful
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It really touched my heart Adithya π Soo Pure. So Beautiful. :’)
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Thank you so much Sheetal for reading. Have a great day
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Loved the piece of writing. Truly inspiring
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Lovely π
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Thank you!
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Great piece of writing
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Thank you so much Sunith π
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A splendid piece of a write up! Love thisπ
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Thank you so much Pooja π€
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Amazingly beautiful post dear βΊοΈ
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Pleasure always for ur words β€οΈπ§’
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So beautiful! π
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Beautiful.π
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Thank you Amartya π
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Pleasure readingπ
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Its beautiful πΊ Analogy just flows so well. πππ Especially the end. Also visit our profile for some beautiful pictures here: Rabi S Saha & Rabi Shankar Saha Photography . I hope you would like my pictures also βΊ.
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Thank you and sure
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Beautiful. π
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Thank you so much
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Heart breaking and beautiful.
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Thank you very much Suja
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Beautiful Post! Adithya π
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It’s showing how flawed and gifted you’re as a writer..as a human being
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Beautifully heartfelt!β€
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A tight slap on the mouths that try to teach women to be just soft and nothing more.
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After long time, I read something very touching…I really love it π
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Thank you so much Deep. Means a lot to me
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Inspiring. I look forward to your words for warmth.π»π
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Thank you beautiful π
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Awesome dear Aditya ππ
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Thank you
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Really awesome
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Thank you
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Excellent poem, really loved it. Btw can you please support me in my journey as I’m new to wordpress, even a like would mean a lot to me.
Thank You
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Thank you adithya, you really made my day. I never thought that I would meet such a kind soul like you. Thank you for everything. This kind act shows me that still there is humanity and hope.
Thank you
Have a marvellous day ahead.
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You too Keshav
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Well I have also written a few poems, please check them and tell me where’s scope of improvement.
Thank you
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Sure
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It could be difficult to read in a smartphone or in a small screen, I would recommend to read in a desktop or in a pc as the lines of poems gets mixed and it is difficult to read
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Can you tell a solution to this problem- why my lines of poems in my blog gets mixed up? How do you avoid this? Please reply
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I use WordPress app and when I am writing on it I encounter no such issues. maybe you can try that.
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I’ll surely try it. Thanks
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