My best friend called me yesterday
to tell me he is happy now
and he also added that he’s drunk
he then told me about his new magical power
to fold bottles into memories of his past life
and how when he drinks from them
he can see the sky falling
and he then told me how much he danced
because of this
and he said now when he looks up
he can see stars again
and they looked like me
and that’s why he is calling me.
He then told me how much he loved me,
he never said this to me before and
he said he loved me like his mother,
very innocent but that
he will not be his father,
broken and bruised and tired of living
and he will never behave to me like
how his father did with him
he would never crumble me
inside his origami palms
like petals of a fragile flower
and use it’s color to paint rage.
He then said that he misses me
and now when he look down
he can see the earth move under his feet
and how he see the dirt forming
a mountain in front of him
but he feels like he can conquer this mountain
because it’s all his
and because he have this love inside him
which keeps on whispering in his ears
that he can do it.
And then he broke down into a stream of sobs
until I whispered I love you back to him
.
.
©The Rendezvous Club 2019
All Rights Reserved!
How do you manage to come up with such wondrous and powerful words in your last paragraph in each of your works?
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I don’t do it on purpose but the fact that you noticed it is making me really really happy. I was actually thinking about give up writing. Thank you so much for this ❤️
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Oh, please don’t give up writing. You shall be displeasing the souls of so many profound and avid readers of your blog, including me😊
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Thank you so much for the support Niharika ❤️
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My pleasure❤
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beautifully written and I love the last line! 🙂
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Thank you so much 🤗
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it was truly my pleasure.
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WOW! great as always
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Thank you very much 🤗🤗🤗
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Most welcome! 🙂
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Ahhh this is so good ❤
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Thank you dear 🤗
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Ohohohoh Beautifully portrayed 🙌🏻♥️
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Thank you dear
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Beautiful poetry.
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Thank you so much 🤗
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A pleasure!
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“inside his origami palms
like petals of a fragile flower”
Deep.
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Thank you ❤️
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Love can do everything ❤
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It sure can ❤️
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Fabulous
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Thank you very much ❤️
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Beautifully penned
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Thank you
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tmi
and that is why
you cry alone
laugh
cast
doubts
away
cold heat
white sweats~~
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Yes true
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❤️❤️❤️
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Thank you so much for sharing well.
It is pleasure to visit London and see you.
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Heartfelt.
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Thank you
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wow! this was beautiful
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Thank you so much
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Loved reading this beautiful celebration of friendship!
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Thank you ❤️❤️❤️
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This was heartbreaking, I devoured every word of it.
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❤️
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Beautiful description by him even when drunk
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❤️
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I have to say.. I missed ur endings.. no one ends it like you do..
keep blogging and u know more than ur entire post I look for the ending 😜
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Ha ha thank you
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❤❤❤❤❤❤ it is so Drenched in love,I can’t describe. Thank you so much for sharing.
😊😊
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Thank you so much for reading dear.
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