My leg stopped being in motion
At the sight of a creeping plant
Which looked so strange!
It bore no tendrils and
Pink were it’s buds but
Flowers purple, so tiny yet
Fragrant so divine.
I plucked a leaf from it’s tip
A tender leaf, which was not
At it’s best.
I pressed it against
The herculean strength of
My index finger and my thumb.
I pressed it hard,
Until the plasma collapsed and
The vacuoles bursts.
Until the walls broke down and
Turned to mesh,
Until the chlorophyll made my thumb green,
I asked the leaf,
Can you feel me killing you?
Does it hurt?
Is there any pain?
Then I wiped the tears
From my eyes,
The chlorophyll spread to my cheeks.
When did I stop loving the world?
When did the world stop loving me?
Maybe when my conscience broke
My heart turned green.
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11/12/18 The Rendezvous Club
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Eco-friendly heart 😂.. well penned professor.. ! Nd yeah,, Every living thing feel pain, you nicely examined 💚
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Are you really a professor?😂♥️♥️😁
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Ha ha no. He just calls me that 😁
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Ok😂😂♥️
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Thank you so much Nath 🤗. I’m happy that you liked it.
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I am speechless after reading this Adi. It’s so emotional. I am sure the leaf felt pain and so did you as indicated by the tears. A heart which can write like this never stops loving and is never stopped being loved.🤗♥️
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I’m so happy that you understood my poem dear 😊. Thank you so much 🤗
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What a beautiful read. Reading this I learned two things – you are tender at heart and you have some love for botany 😊🌸
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Ha ha thank you Shantanu. I’m happy that you liked this.
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I sure did
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Beautiful and deep yaar adorable adi 🖤
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Thank you so much Nirant 🤗
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So beautiful. Thoughts expressed are so unique.
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Thank youuuuuuuuuu 😊
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😊
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Such a beautiful creation
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Thank you so much Sakshi 😊
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My pleasure 😊
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This is soo good💕👌
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Thank youuuuuuuuuu 😊
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Wonderful…. Keep up the great work…❤️
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Thank you very much Jhavinder 🤗
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I honestly don’t have the words to express how much I loved this poem x
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Thank youuuuuuuuuu so much for this heartwarming comment 🤗😘
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You’re welcome :O) x
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Raw, honest and beautiful … I felt myself being rushed on to read the next line. Well written, great job.
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Thank you so much 🤗
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It’s so intense..i love reading it🌿
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Thank you so very much! 🤗
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Creative piece, is it the reflection of the greenery of God’s Own Country? 🙂
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No I actually killed a leaf and asked it the above questions 😶
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Yes but the empathy may be inspired from somewhere!
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Yeah 😊
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Love the post 🙈🙈
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Thank you Pia 🤗
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This so beautiful and emotional!!
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Thank you so much Kranti 🤗.
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Oh, .. ‘My heart turned green’ .. bravo.. very beautifully woven.. 👍🏼😊👌🏼👌🏼👏🏼👏🏼
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Thank you so so much Debi 😘
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😇😇
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I loved it to the core. You are getting better and better with each passing day. Kudos.
But why did you kill it ?😣
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Thank you so much Sunil. You made my day 🤗.
I don’t know why I killed it. It just happened.
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You are welcome. But lately you have been killing a lot of people. First you killed two people now you killed a leaf. What next?
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Ha ha oh God I don’t know
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If you come to know then inform me.
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Sure
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The emotion you expressed in this poem is so pure, so intense, so heartfelt and authentic, it simply touches my heart. You are amazingly talented, thank you for writing like this!
And thank you for following my blog, I’m honored beyond words!
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Thank you so much. I’m happy that you liked it. And it’s my pleasure following you 🤗
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This is so damn beautiful!
This reminds of an old disney movie called ‘A troll in central park’. The only difference is that the troll had a magical green thumb with which he could grow flowers & trees. (:
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Thank you Nameera. I’ve not seen that movie yet but I want to now.
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It’s a kids movie but one of my favorites! The theme revolves around importance of nature in our lives. You should definitely give it a watch (:
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I will watch it
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Beautifully written!
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Thank you so much 🤗
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My pleasure! Stay blessed!
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What a flooring piece Adithya
The raw emotional tenderness displayed by the reality of causing harm to the world sometimes unintentionally and yet we still love it.
Very beautifully penned .
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I’m so over the moon that you like it 😍
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Aww I’m glad to know that 💗
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Great ! The last line was really heart touching ….. beautifully written !!!!
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Thank youuuuuuuuuu 😊
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😊😊😊👍👍👍
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Very beautifully put and indeed I found it very unique…
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Thank you so much Piyush 😊
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Wow! Beautiful thoughtful poem! Loved the metaphors and beauty of wisdom,keep blogging dear 🌿🌿🌿
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Thank youuuuuuuuuu 😊
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My pleasure 🌿
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In-depth thought. So, was the action based on compassion, curiosity or malice? I see that you identified with the very nature of the object of your action. It reminds me of love beyond comprehension that you had feelings for the leaf and if the leaf could speak – it would say that’s okay – I love you. I could have some spiritual connotation as well. 🙂
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The world is a strange place, and act of killing that leaf was not intentional. It wasn’t out if hate either, it all happened in the moment out of the pressure and lack of love from the world that the person was experience and mostly out of fear too.
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True. The world in itself does not reflect true love and the pressures of life contribute to irrational actions. There needs to be a regeneration of love within self to help contribute to the overall generation of love in the world. While many don’t agree, true love from what I’ve found is through the love of God. 🙂
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Amen. God is the only true source of unconditional love.
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This ♥️♥️
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Thank you 😊
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The leaf can be related to the human emotions, yes or no? 😢
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Yes it can be
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Thoughts expressed very beautifully.
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Thank you 😊
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This is amazing write up. Loved each word of it, the way you have penned. “The heart turned green”. Waw. Beautiful creation indeed. 👍👏👏🙏🙏
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Uh. This one is strong and intense. 🥳
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Thank you 😊
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My pleasure.😊
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Lovely .
Deep sense.
Love.
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Thank youuuuuuuuuu 😊
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Peace
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Tender heart, crying out for the tender leaves….
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Yeah 😥
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Thank you 😊
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Thank you
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Beautifully written. Anand Bose from Kerala
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Thank you Anand
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Superb! Brilliant! loved this post! Thanks for sharing!
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Thank you 😊
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welcome!
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