Because one day my father left
And didn’t come back.
Because he said that don’t let your daughter
Grow up like you did
Hence I decided to be the fruit of her womb.
Because she stood up for herself
And I felt empowered.
Because she showed me, we women
We can do it all alone.
Because I am from her
All this rage and love.
Because she deserves a place with me
In my victory.
Because she is the one who made it
Possible.
Because she didn’t give up.
Because she taught me courage is enough.
Because she said being a woman
Is not an end to bravery.
Because her name means the moon
And I am the sun and with her
I’m the whole freaking solar system.
Because I am from her
And I am everything she dreamt of.
Because it’s not just a name,
It’s an identity
Which is drenched in the sweat and blood
Of a woman’s life long struggle.
And because it’s possible to be named after
Your mother and still be human.
.
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I loved the metaphor of solar system…please read once again and correct the grammatical errors…emotions are nicely written dear.all the best in life.
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I am really very bad at grammar so can you please point out the mistakes that I’ve made.
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Hence I decided…(no need of and & I again
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we women ( not “us”)
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Thank you so much
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Starting with because can be considered as a poetic license, so no comments 😊😊😊
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He he okay
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Quite an empowering post, Adithya. Keep up the amazing work!
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Thank you so much 💕
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Just beautiful😍
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Thank you very much ❤️
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No no, thank you for writing and posting this wonderful creation😍💖
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Absolutely awesome.
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Thank you so much Sadje 💙
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You’re welcome 😉
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Nice one Adi 💜
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Thank you 😊
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Such a powerful message – and an ode to your mother ❤️
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Thank you so much Shantanu 💕
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My pleasure always
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Bravo. Beautifully written
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Thank you
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You are welcome Adithya
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Beautiful.
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Thank you
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