The Sparks that flew off the metal rod
While it was dragged along the road towards the house
Fails to amaze me for I knew what was going to happen
I listened to the melody of the rock
Against the metal as it came closer and closer
I always wondered what desecrated
The shrine of humanity in him
Why did he always smell of sulphur
What made him an inverterate abuser
The moment the door shut
Shivering I stay, not being able to look at his face.
The blows of the metal rod fell more hard
On her heart than on her body
The tempestuous wind never calmed down
Inside these four walls . . . .
So many days, so many blows,
So many metal rods, blood and marks and cuts and screams.
I wish Mamma was bold
But never did she let the metal rod touch me,
But I wish that she did that for her too. . . .
She says that he was never always like this
But still he’s the smear of black paint
On my canvas
He’s the indelible mark on my childhood. . . .
He is my Pappa and I wish that he wasn’t.
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Painful.😢
It is so awesome. Wow. Wow. ❤️
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Thank you Amartya 😊
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You are welcome.🤗🎈
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Nicely ‘pain’ted dear..!! 🙂
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Thank you Debi 😊
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I’m speechless😥😥😥
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Don’t be sad 🤗
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To phir itna acha mt likha kijeye😛
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😂😅
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Oh my heart. I am so sorry. ❤ ❤ ❤ Devastating but so powerfully expressed.
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Thank you dear friend 😊
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Aaahhhh😥so painful adii
But u r just a fabulous person who can nailed it with ur words 🙌🙌🙌🙌
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Thank you so much dear 😭
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Pleasure always 😉 🎀
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Nicely written
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Thank you 😊
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Pain painted beautifully……..great writing Adithya 😘
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Thank you very much Sakshi 😊
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My pleasure 😊
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Outstanding
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Thank youuuuuuuuuu 😊
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Welcome 😊
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Oh my. It was so heartfelt. I hope your mom and you get your share of peace and happiness. Stay blessed
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We are fine Shantanu. This was just fictional 🤗
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Oh lord. You scared me. Thank goodness
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🤗
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What a relief! It all seemed too real to be fictional. The imagery was vivid.
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Thank you 😊
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It’s intense, you just nailed it with black paint👌👌👌 awesome poem 👌
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Thank you Hardip 😊
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And the best poet award goes to you.. really you deserve best poet title. It really touches the heart 💙👍
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Thank you Unni 😊
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Oh my God this was so painful!!
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🤗
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Very beautifully crafted. Knowing that this is fiction it shows how able you are to put yourself in the situation of another person and write from that perspective. Very, very well done. Loved it!
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Thank you so much dear 😊
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You are very welcome.
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Extremely intense…😭😭
…U r a true romanticist.. 😭😭
👏👏👌👌😭😭
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Aww thank you Sushma 😘
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Just wow
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Thank you so much 😊
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Most welcome dear😊
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Poignant… heartfelt and deep..you painted it beautifully through words!!
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Thank you 🙂
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Btw I am little surprised..Lord Unni
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Mujhe bhi aisa aisa bade english words waala comment next post mein chahiye 😦
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I think I always leave a big comment on your post!!
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Mujhe woh poignant jaise bade bade words chahiye… In return i will give u … Oh u r rich so u dont need money.. oh u have a fridge full of food.. oh u have lots of dress.. in return i will say thanks 😖
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😄😄 it’s just how and what I feel after reading the post!! Your thanks is more bigger than materialistic stuff dear!!
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Oh 🤔 usa mein abh raath hei ya subah? Agar raath hei toh teddy 🐻 agar subah hei toh ☕ tc cu
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Actually afternoon hai and I hope it’s a cup of tea I am teaholic
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Afternoon hei toh 🍨 iss garmi mein aapka rang aur roop sooraj ke kirano se Kahi kamm na ho jaaye.. so eat icecream.. cu
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Thank you! 😊 It’s raining today ☔️
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😖🏳️ i surrendered
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😄😄 let’s have tea ☕️
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Thank you so much for your kind words Kranti 🤗
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🤗
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I will forever think of bad memories from the past as black paint on the canvas of my life. You have amazing insight and are very adept at putting that insight into the perfect words and form.
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Thank you so much for that motivating words 😊
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It needs a lot of courage and Honestly level to write Such wild and thoughtful Lines..Hats off for you…such a brave girl you are😊
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Thank you so much Ashish 🤗
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This was so painful adiii..you wrote it beautifully..really touching..
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Thank you dear 😊
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It’s such a beautiful story. I love it 😊
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Thank you 😊
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Great poem!
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Thank you 😊
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What a absolutely strong piece! Felt every word! Well done!
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Thank you very much Warren 😊
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My pleasure to read!
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This is just so saddening.
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😔
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This just hurt….
((((((hugs))))))
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Thank you so much dear 😊
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This is very sad! I am sorry for the hurt you and your mother experienced!
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Thank you
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