Why do we want people to stay
Only when they bid adieu ?
Why didn’t we want to hold them near
When we were their dear ?
Why do smiles fail and eyes talk
When we hear goodbyes ?
Why does something that starts
With a good feels this bad in our hearts ?
Why do we still stay there under the
Same tree in the rain, even though
Seasons changed so many times ?
Why did we feel as if we’ve parted
With our soul, when they’ve parted with us ?
Why do we hear their words
Incessantly echoing in our ears,
And our heartbeats stays the same ?
Why do goodbyes hurts this much ?
Why do some goodbyes hurts this much ?
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Its Amazing..
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Thank you Jaya π
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Knowing that it will be the ‘last time’ is always painful…..great piece of writing :O) x
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Thank you so much π
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yeah that’s so hard to digest when our closed one bid goodbye..
Everyone can relate this post. It hurts because they would have become more than a habit…
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Yeah that’s true
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This post lanced my heart out….soo much poignant….very easily related to it….Really’ Goodbye ‘ is the biggest heart breaking word…really…πββοΈπββοΈ
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Yeah π
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Right in the feels! Lovely poem β€οΈ
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Thank you so much π
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Beautifully written……. goodbyes are always painful… people leave and memories stay
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Yes that’s is very true.
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Yes they do.
Beautifully written. I could feel it.
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Thank youuuuuuuuuu π
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You are welcome. Your work always leaves me with some questions and everlasting emotions.π
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lovely and well written β€
thanks for sharing
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Thank you so much π
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Because we think we are immortals. I so love the emotions you portrayed. You writing is a bliss
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Thank you Shantanu π€
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You are welcome
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Lovely thoughts, thanks for sharing!.. π
“I never say goodbye because goodbye sounds too much like forever and forever makes me cry”…. (Larry “Dutch” Woller )
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So poignant and beautiful. Cheers!
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So true. I hate goodbyes. Yet we say them all the time donβt we. Lovely poem
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Thank youuuuuuuuuu π
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Badhiya!!!
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Thank you π
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What a captivating poem.πΈ
Even though goodbyes are a daily occurrence they really suck.
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Thank youuuuuuuuuu π
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Youβre welcome sweetie π
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Such an amazing work….Loved it
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Thank you so much dear π
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Really nice!
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Thank youuuuuuuuuu π
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Beautifully written! You ask all the right questions!β€
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Thank you so much dear π
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Good Byes’ are really BAD – Well – mostly depending on the context and the last interactions or failure of trust, communication or deep emotional hurt. Wonderful poetry. I liked it. Regards Jay
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Thank you Jay π€
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If I can ask where in Kerala is your place friend? What do you study? literature or something? Anyway you have to study well, okay? Then you can achieve everything with your talent I guess π .
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Its so profound and beautiful at the same timeππ
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Thank you very much π
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OMG I was thinking exactly all this today. You penned it down so beautifully and captured its true essence. Extremely well done
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Thank you so much Sona π
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Because a piece of you has left with them. :_( Nice post.
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Thank you Susi π
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Beautiful
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Thank you Meera π€ π€
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Beautiful Post. To me I guess that’s the beauty of life through every hello there comes endless adventures and laughs and through every goodbye you get this bittersweet feeling of endless questions will you ever see this person again. Again amazing post keep it upβ€
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Thank you so much dear π
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I hate goodbyes. Lovely poem!
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Thank youuuuuuuuuu dear π€
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This is so beautiful! I love this
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Thank youuuuuuuuuu π
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