Banging my head on the wall
Hoping that this sound will last
Because the words that you left behind
They never left my ears and it’s drilling inside my head.
Chills traveling down my spine,
I gave you my heart and you broke it in half
Drowned one half in the ocean of words
And burned the other in the flame of hate.
I feel weak after you’ve left
I thought you to be true, more true
Than the light the sun holds.
And actually you didn’t leave
I pushed you out and
I used up all my strength for that.
Now I’m weak but I know this weakness
Will make me strong.
Banging in the same place repeatedly
Will make you numb but
In the ravages of time the cells will die
And new fresh ones will replace them.
New ones which could feel the pain
The same pain which I feels right now.
Then again the lesson you’ve taught me now
Will forever stay and thereby making me
Less vulnerable to pain, in the future that’s to come.
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24/11/18 Ā© The Rendezvous Club
All Rights Reserved!
The story seems to painful.. though beautifully penned ā¤
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Wonderful piece Adithya, itās emotionally invoking
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Beautiful poem Adithya
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I feel each & every wordšÆ… Very well doneā¤š
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Perfect words to go with the graphic you chose. Cheers!
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Wow this is so painful yet beautifully portrayed
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Deep and touching words!!
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Emotionally Invoking….. Beautifully written
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Liked the representation of emotion in befitting words.. More power to you Miss..!
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Nicely expressed in the flow of beautiful sad poem….keep blogging dear! Have a great day ā
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Each and every line is so deep… It proves pain can be beautiful..šš
Sometimes when you read something like this and can relate…
it confuses you whether to be happy or feel pity about it.
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Painful! The poem will touch every single person with a heart!
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Does it really happen all the time? Does it? It does at times. The pain burns us clear for freash leaves to bloom. But not all burns heal. Do they?
However, the hope is the strength, the courage to face head on rather than try to escape, for there is nowhere to escape. And that, my friend, is beaitifully portrayed.
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