I think I love you
But I would not tell you.
You have places to go
And I have eyes to meet.
Our desire part ways
In the crossroads.
Our love unties
As future stare at us.
What good will love bring?
When I need you,
Yet not want you.
When I love you,
Yet need to part you.
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©10/04/19 The Rendezvous Club
All Rights Reserved!
That’s so deep.. Caught every emotion
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Thank you!
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My pleasure always.
May I know your good name?
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My name is Adithya. What’s yours?
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Beautiful name, Adithya! Can I use it?
My name is Priya.
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Yes you sure can
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Oh,thank you!
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You have made love into the raw emotion that it is my good Friend. Should I use your name or leave it out ? When a kind thoughtful Poetess creates something like this I would be honoured to show you what ” What Good Does Love Bring “. Let me know I will not shy away.
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You can use my name
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Thank you Adithya. You are very talented my friend.
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Beautifully written
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Thank you so much!
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You’re welcome 😉
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Amazingly beautiful stuff adii and Beautifully penned too !!
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Thank you very much Nirant 🤗
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Pleasure my cute frnd 😍
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Nice poem bro
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Thank you!
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Your words caption the essence of falling out love . . . a step forward, two steps backwards.
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Thank you so much dear 🤗
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the things
we do
within our human zoo
you too!
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Ha ha ha yeah
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This is once again a brilliant piece. Wonderfully written.
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Thank you Moushmi 🤗
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This is brilliantly written! Beautiful!❤️
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Thank you so much Richa 🤗
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it’s wonderful…congratulations!
have a nice day 🙂
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Thank you!
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Beautiful love poem!
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Thank you so much Ayesha 🤗 🤗
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Wow! I absolutely love this! I totally felt this one 😊🤭
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Thank you so much Jessy 🤗
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Thus broke my heart.
So beautiful 💔🙌
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Thank you so much dear 🤗
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so so good! thank you for sharing this…….. 🙂
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Emotional n touchy.. I loved it
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Thank you very much 🤗
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Your welcome
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Sad but beautiful!
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Thank you very much Winnie 🤗
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You’re welcome! 😊❤️
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👌💟
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Thank you so much dear 🤗
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Amazing… 😃 🙏
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Thank you very much dear
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This is beautiful! The way you have written the emotions is amazing!!
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Thank you so very much Kranti 🤗
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My pleasure always 🤗
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Awesome
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Thank you so much Soiba 🤗🤗🤗🤗
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I love this 🙂
Sometimes things don’t work out. Sometimes the timing is bad. Sometimes you love someone who doesn’t love you the same way. Sometimes you realize you are not in love anymore.
Love can be painful and is a huge risk. I still think it’s worth it. Worth the pain. Worth all the risk.
There are no guarantees.
Beautiful poem, Adithya
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You are right. Thank you so much Jason 🤗
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Thank you! You are inspiring me
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Beautifu and heartbreaking dear.
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Amazing write up Adi..
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Thank you Chiru 🤗
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Beautifully crafted. Both words and emotions. 🙂
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Thank you so much dear
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What a beautiful poem – I for sure love this
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Thank you so much Shantanu 🤗
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Great read! This line is an awesome one…
” In the crossroads.
Our love unties”
Have a great day! will be back to read more. 🙂
-Renee Verona
rarityofparadise.com
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Thank you so much dear 🤗
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Anytime 🙂
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Wow..romantis..Gbu..
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Thank you
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Thank you!
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Beautifully powerful with great emotional intensity. Loved it, Adithya!
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Thank you Marta 🤗
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My pleasure. 🤗
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Oh I love this 😍❤️
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Thank you Sakshi 🤗
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My pleasure 😊
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I love it when in simplest words the deepest thoughts are expressed. Absolutely loved this Adi❤
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Thank you so very much Yasmin 😍
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https://papersonfire.wordpress.com/2019/04/13/the-mosquito/
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Wow poetry indeed… Beautiful
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Thank you so much 🤗
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👌👌👌
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🤗
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😍
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😁
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